refactor the skill system to adhere to the lore handbook

NightclubArcadia/Assets/Dialogue/Commentary.yarn

@@ -1,18 +1,22 @@
 // Passive skill commentary. Fired by CommentarySystem, never <<jump>>ed to.
 // One node per (context, skill) pair; if a skill has nothing to say about a
 // context, simply omit the node and it won't be considered.
+//
+// Writing rules (code does not enforce these):
+// - Wrong Truth failures: no failure signal in the prose; the UI banner is the only tell.
+// - Documentary routes are gated on Act and errand state, never on a voice.
 
-title: Commentary_Entrance_Queue_paranoia
+title: Commentary_Entrance_Queue_facework
 ---
-Paranoia: The man three back hasn't looked at his phone once. Nobody waits like that.
+FACEWORK: His hands are too still for someone this far back in a queue. What's he practising not to reach for?
 ===
 
-title: Commentary_Entrance_Queue_read_room
+title: Commentary_Entrance_Queue_long_shift
 ---
-Read the Room: Everyone here is pretending they're not cold.
+THE LONG SHIFT: Forty minutes. Nobody's shifted their weight the way cold people do. They're paying for this wait in something else.
 ===
 
-title: Commentary_Entrance_Queue_streetwise
+title: Commentary_Entrance_Queue_the_float
 ---
-Streetwise: Door's been "slow tonight" for forty minutes. That's a price, not a queue.
+THE FLOAT: Door's been "slow tonight" for forty minutes. Convert that: it's a price, not a queue. Who's eating that?
 ===